In writing we have been doing narrative writing were we created a fiction story. I haven't finished, I am hoping that I can finish in in the holidays.
Her is my story so far.
Chapter 1
Mr. Puss
and
The Guardian
Was it a crash that really woke me, or was it that dragon I have been seeing around the palace? I thought of calling Mr. Puss or if I should just go back to sleep. But I decided to wake up Queen Cleara my mistress so I got out of my kitty bed and jumped onto Clara's bed and started meowing and meowing “get of Princess Annabel I’m sleeping” Clara said so I jumped off her bed and went to the window the moment I go up I thought I had seen a tall long shadow creeping into the woods. When I looked at the car it was demolished flated squashed never to see the road again. I jumped down of the window and trotted down stairs to the ball room and I saw the butler Mr.puss standing in the middle of the room and not moving eyes fixed on the open door and the demolished flated squashed never to see the road again car. I walked to Mr.Puss and gave him a polite shove but he didn't budge so shoved him a little harder still no movement. A gush of cold air brushed my whiskers I shivered I went to go and close the door but it wouldn't budge either what was I going to do.
“I know what you can do”
“w-w-who a-a-are y-y-you”
“I am your Guardian”
“My what”
“Your guardian” “And as I was saying” I know what you can do”
“Well are you going to tell me or not kind sir”
“Well if you dont want me to then I don’t have to”
by this time I was getting a little annoyed
“I WANT TO KNOW”
“OK OK no need to get angry“
“sorry, so are you going to tell me”
“Yes”
“thank you”
“so the thing that you can do is bring a table and put it in front of Mr. Puss so he will snap out of the trance that he is in”
“He’s in a trance?”
“Yes, do I have to put all the dots together”
While my guardian was talking to himself I was looking for a table but don’t forget that I can’t see my gardien so it was fairly easy to ignore him. I finally found a tea table, and with some trouble I placed it in front of Mr. Puss I waited for a moment but nothing happened
“Nothing is happening”
“Just wait” My guarding said, with the tiniest hint of frustration in his creaky voice.
I waited of course, and suddenly Mr,Puss gasped and fell over “Mr.Puss”! I cried, are you ok! Mr.Puss was breathing really rapidly
and seemed to be asleep but his eyelids was flickering and slowly beginning to open “Mr.Puss, it’s me Princess Annabel.
Chapter 2
What Had Happened?
When Mr.Puss woke up he looked at me like I was some kind of ghost
“What's wrong Mr.Puss you looked surprised to see me”
“No dear I’m fine I seemed to have fainted”
“You didn’t faint, you were in a trance”
Mr. Puss looked thoughtful like he was in another world, Where there was no bad things no sadness.
“Mr.Puss, Mr.Puss”
“What, Oh its you Annabel”
“you need to go to bed”
“ Ok, but before I go You need to know that the dragon was holding the Emerald eye”
“Oh no the emerald eye is the most powerful thing in the Enchanted Forest”
“now do you understand why I was so worried. so I opened the door and that dragon was running across the yard he turned and saw me I looked in to his hypnotic eyes and thats all I can remember”
“That emerald eye is the power of the forest and if it’s goes out of the barrier then the forest will be to weak to stop the wizards from taking magic”
“Go to bed, you need rest, I will see what I can do”
“Thank you Annabel” He said with a sigh that ragg in in my ears That sigh was was gave me the confidence to go and get the emerald eye back”
Zeminar and His Plan
Far away outside the Enchanted Forest Zeminar was going over his plan to capture Annabelle and tell Clara that if he wants to see her cat ever again she has to give him the power to control the Emerald Eye. When Monstro came back with the Stone he would be unstoppable when he finds out how to use it of course. Life hadn't gone very well 1st his mum died and then his dad left him and then well he became evil and he swore that he will have revenge on the world and all on it.
Chapter 3
The plan of Attack
I went to my secret room where I have lots and lots of TV screens that show all the places in the enchanted forest I also have one of those floating 3D maps that are green. All this is what I made and only for 3 people me,myself and I and no one else. Not even Mr. Puss knows. I have 3 cameras outside the Enchanted forest 2 in the mountains of Ever-day where the good dragons live and 1 in the mountains of Ever-night were all the bad dragons live the reason there is only one in the mountains on Ever-night is that only 1 spy could get in but couldn't get out, thats when I stopped sending spies out.The 3D map was shimmering like a small creek that flows along small pebbles. Everything was quiet to quiet the screens showed a bluray shadow in the mountains of Ever-night Marago the leader of the mortify (the band of bad Dragons) came out and spoke to the shadow.
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