ANZAC- Reading

Dawn service

This is a story of someone's Great-Grandpa

that we had to recreate. We go clues from the poem. I put myself in the shows the writer

My mum told me about my great-Grandpa was one of the flyers in the war. Grandpa didn't have a laugh he had a wheeze like croke, when he rarely found something funny he would give out an exasperated wheeze that sounded like wheels and pulleys turning in his chest,you had to pat him firmly on his brown jumper that he loved to where so that he wouldn't choke, he had little bits of hair like small white feathers sticking out of the top of his head.

In the war my Grandpa loved to read letters that he got from home. he would wait eagerly for the mail cart to arrive

When grandpa was nineteen he had a little note log book and that he would write in with a soft pencil. In his book he wrote that he a really nervous about flying.

“UM” he hated the word “UM”once he made her mom's brother write it out and then bury it in the garden.

Why I never knew how My Grandfather felt about the war.

I never meet my  Grandpa because he died before I was even born.

Writing-Scooting in Schools Should be Band

In our writing we did some guided writing (when the planing is done for you).We had to do it about about scooting in schools.

Scooting is dangerous to other children and your self and do you really want that? If you do then i am here to change your mind and if you don’t well then still listen.

Just think if half  the kids in the school scooter then there will be lines and dead bits on the field from scooting on it plus there will be no space to walk or even to move.

If half the kids in the school bring there will be no space for other things like Basketball, netball and other sports. Most small kids can’t control their scooter or if they're going to fast then they might knock over other small children. The brake on the scooter isn't very effective and slows gradually not immediately.

Scooting if exiting and you can do all sort of tricks like grinding, Spinning and Over-head but to intermediate students it doesn't seem “COOL” to wear the proper safety gear (knee pad, elbow pads .etc.) and if year 2 or 3’s see the year 7 or 8’s do all the complicated moves that takes years and years  of practice and precision and try and do the trick then its most likely for something to go wrong.

I know that I have changed your mind so STOP scooting in schools NOW and all will be well